
(초 5-6) 글쓰기 막히는 아이? 생각을 구조로 정리해 쓰는 4회 완성 | 피드백 제공
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글쓰기를 어려워하는 아이도 문장부터 시작해 생각을 정리하고 자연스럽게 이어 쓰는 방법을 배웁니다. 문장, 요약, 구조, 서술형까지 단계적으로 확장하며 글의 흐름을 이해하고 스스로 완성하는 경험을 합니다. 막히던 글쓰기가 끝까지 이어지는 경험을 통해 자신감을 키우고, 학교 서술형 평가에도 적용할 수 있는 실질적인 글쓰기 힘을 기릅니다.
96,000G
(US$66.24)
91,000G(US$62.79)
Class Type
Multi-Session
Ages
12-13
Class Size
Max 8people
Duration
60min
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온다정쌤
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📝 글쓰기가 두렵지 않아요!
생각의 흐름이 보이고,
말처럼 자연스레 쓰게 돼요
생각은 있는데, 문장이 안 써지는 아이
이제는 ‘쓰는 방법’을 배워야 할 때입니다
글쓰기 앞에서 멈춰버리는 아이들, 생각보다 많습니다.
✔ 어떻게 시작해야 할지 모르겠고
✔ 쓰다 보면 흐름이 끊기고
✔ 결국 한두 줄 쓰고 멈춰버립니다
이건 실력이 부족해서가 아니라,
‘생각을 글로 옮기는 방법’을 배우지 않았기 때문입니다.
🌱 수업 후 우리 아이 이렇게 달라져요
자기 생각을 문장으로 분명히 표현해요
글의 순서를 고민하며 자연스럽게 이어 써요
요약, 주제문, 글의 흐름을 스스로 정리할 수 있어요
학교 서술형 평가에도 자신 있게 도전해요
✏️ 수업, 이렇게 진행돼요
쉬운 문장 만들기부터
글 전체의 구조 잡는 연습까지 단계별로 진행해요
다양한 글쓰기 활동
(요약, 생각 나열, 순서 맞추기 등)으로 글의 흐름을 익혀요
완성도 있는 한 편의 글을
스스로 끝까지 써보는 경험을 해요
🎯 이런 친구들에게 꼭 추천해요
글을 쓰려고 하면 머릿속이 하얘지는 친구
생각은 많은데 글로 표현하는 게 힘든 초5~6학년
문단 연결이 어색하거나, 서술형 문제에 약한 친구
국어 글쓰기에 자신감을 갖고 싶은 학생 누구나
🔍 궁금해요, 어떤 활동을 하나요?
간단한 한 줄 쓰기로 시작해 중심 생각을 정리하고,
주어진 소재를 바탕으로
문단을 구성하는 방법을 단계적으로 익힙니다.
막히는 순간 바로 질문할 수 있도록
소규모(최대 8명)로 운영하며,
완성한 글은 함께 읽고 피드백을 주고받으며
친구들의 글을 통해 나만의 글쓰기 방법도 자연스럽게 배워갑니다.
⏰ 한 눈에 보는 4회 수업 흐름
• 1회차: 자기표현 문장 만들기 & 생각 정리
• 2회차: 요약하기와 문단 연결 연습
• 3회차: 글의 구조 익히기와 소재 확장
• 4회차: 한 편의 글 완성, 친구들과 나누기
글을 쓰는 게 어렵다고 느끼던 아이도 서서히 ‘할 수 있겠다’는
자신감을 갖게 될 거예요.
학교에서, 일상에서 글쓰기 걱정을 확실하게 덜어주고 싶다면,
이 수업이 좋은 시작이 되어줄 거예요!
“문장부터 서술형까지 완성하고,
개별 피드백까지 포함된 글쓰기 수업입니다”

Total 4 sessions
Session 1
생각을 문장으로 정확하게 표현하기
하고 싶은 말을 분명하게 쓰는 연습
Session 2
핵심을 정리하고 문단으로 확장하기
중심 생각을 잡고 흐름 있게 이어 쓰기
Session 3
글의 흐름을 자연스럽게 연결하기
이유와 예시를 활용해 생각 깊이 확장하기
Session 4
주제에 맞는 글 한 편 완성하기
서술형 유형에 맞춰 스스로 글쓰기 적용
Great for These Kids
글의 시작과 마무리를 스스로 완성하는 힘을 키우고 싶은 학생
생각을 정리해 논리적으로 표현하는 연습이 필요한 초5~6학년
서술형·논술형 평가를 대비해 글쓰기 기초를 다지고 싶은 학생
감이 아닌 이해를 바탕으로 글을 쓰고 싶은 아이
Check Before Class
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필기도구(연필 또는 샤프, 지우개)
- 2
개인 노트 또는 A4 종이
- 3
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온다정쌤
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Hello. I am Teacher Onda Jeong, a reading education expert. I earned a Master's degree in Reading Education from a graduate school of education and have spent over 20 years deeply communicating with children of various ages, from elementary to high school, through the medium of books. Currently, I operate a specialized research institute for reading education, where I plan and develop reading classes and educational content focused on the "essence of reading." I have consistently designed individualized reading strategies that consider a child's personality and developmental stage, as well as practical reading programs applicable in diverse environments such as schools, educational institutions, and homes. In my classes, I help children connect naturally with books and enable them to read, think, and express themselves at their own pace. Utilizing a diverse range of texts—from literature and non-fiction to picture books and classics—I aim for flexible reading where questions, thoughts, emotions, and language are organically interconnected. 📘 Designing Reading Growth by Grade with Teacher Onda Jeong 🌱 Age 7 – "Reading Sense" Starting with Picture Books This is a stage where literacy is awakened before reading, and emotions and imagination gently open up. In picture books with repetitive structures and wordplay texts, children learn the ‘rhythm of reading’ even without knowing the letters. Through activities involving short verbal expressions and hand-decorating, they naturally expand their reading senses. 📝 Elementary Grades 1–2 – A Time for Developing Reading Habits This is a period where reading and writing are naturally connected by reading aloud and repeating the content in their own words. Utilizing picture books and texts based on everyday life, children learn vocabulary and gain experience in organizing their thoughts through short writing. We also assist in forming the reading routines most needed during this stage. 🔍 Elementary Grades 3–4 – A Leap Forward for Expanding Literacy This is a time when the ability to grasp the structure of a text, the main idea, character perspectives, and the flow of information grows, moving beyond mere plot comprehension. By navigating between literature and non-fiction, they solidly practice core literacy strategies such as organizing keywords, finding main ideas, and identifying themes. Through short writing and sharing activities, their breadth of thinking also expands. 🧭 Elementary Grades 5–6 – The Starting Point for Self-Directed Reading For upper grades, "post-reading thinking" is extremely important. Students practice summarizing, organizing, and developing critical thinking skills through various texts, including newspapers, articles, practical writing, and excerpts from classics. Through the process of selecting books independently, presenting them, or summarizing them in writing, students cultivate both self-directed reading skills and a foundation for critical thinking. 🎧 Classes Where Immersion and Participation Occur Naturally, Even Online Koogeu classes do not simply replicate offline methods; instead, they utilize a structure designed to allow children to focus and participate effectively online. ✔ Short readings + Immediate questions ✔ Utilization of pictures, keywords, and diagrams ✔ Activities connecting speaking, writing, and thinking ✔ Participatory assignments with difficulty levels adjusted step-by-step ✔ Camera-on/off friendly presentation methods Children become fully immersed even through the screen and have a new reading experience, exclaiming, "Ah! It looks much clearer when I read it like this!" 🌟 Real-Life Transformation Cases "A child who struggled to read a book gained the ability to summarize on their own through the 'finding the main sentence' activity." "A child who struggled with speaking saw a steady increase in participation in presentations after implementing a routine of expressing short opinions." "A child with a reluctance to write gained confidence in writing through the 'writing one sentence → expanding to two sentences' activity." "A child with a short attention span increased their class engagement time through schema activation activities before reading." As shown above, we help children experience change within a short timeframe through a class structure tailored to their personality and developmental stage. 🧭 Why Teacher Ondajeong's Class is Special ✔ Individualized approach considering reading tendencies and developmental rhythms ✔ Guiding children toward natural thinking expansion rather than 'analyzing' books ✔ Immersive class structure feasible even online ✔ Classes balanced with literacy, vocabulary, thinking skills, and expression ✔ Designing reading motivation that makes children want to read on their own Every child reads at a different pace and length. I respect these differences and create classes that support reading growth tailored to each individual's rhythm. Reading is a power that illuminates a child's life for a long time. We will naturally and deeply accompany them on their journey of encountering books at their own pace and developing their own thoughts. – Education that reads the child before the book
Education & Certifications
Department of Reading Education, Graduate School of Education, Catholic University of Korea
Completed
Experience & Activities
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Master's Major in Reading Education, Graduate School of Education
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History major
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2005–2025 – Activities as a reading education instructor in elementary, middle, and high schools
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2010–2025 – School Special Education Project Regular Program Reading Discussion Instructor
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2015–2025 – Operation of certification courses for Creative Reading Instructor, Picture Book Instructor, Senior Reading Instructor, and After-School Program Instructor
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2014–2025 – Reading education instructors and parent education instructors at public institutions, schools, lifelong education centers of education offices, libraries, etc.
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2016 - Vocational Training Instructor at the New Employment Center (Creative Convergence Reading Instructor)
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Representative of a specialized reading content research and development institution (2017–2025)
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Development, launch, and operation of a specialized Korean reading program for elementary and middle school students in 2025
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Selected as an Outstanding Instructor by Gyeonggi Provincial Office of Education
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Development, research, and publication of creative reading education materials for elementary school students
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Publication of textbooks for the Reading Instructor certification course
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Reading Guidance Teacher, Level 1 Creative Reading Instructor, Level 1 Creative Character Reading Instructor, Character Reading Instructor
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Picture book instructor, senior reading instructor, after-school instructor
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Level 2 Childcare Teacher, Level 1 Adolescent Psychological Counselor, Child Psychological Counselor, Art Therapy Psychology, Level 2 Multiple Intelligence Evaluator
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10 years as a military reading coaching instructor
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2020 – 2025 – Instructor for Online Elementary and Middle School Reading Classes
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